In the Night (Day 5)
And in the night
there you come
hands like brands
and lips like embers.
The Baby (Day 6)
Little toes
like pink snails.
Little eyes
onyx-dark.
Little tummy
soft as a sack of grain.
Little tuft of hair
a brown coil like darkened bronze.
Little freckles
skin like toasted almonds.
A little laugh
to light the world.
Right now I don’t consider this last poem finished. I’m going to go back and finish it — mostly adding lines, and then fixing the last line (“to light the world”) because it’s hideously cliche. I was pressed for time and space, and thus rushed the poem. The lesson here: poetry can never be rushed.
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